Could someone who speaks English as their first language tell me if my text is without any grammatical errors?
David G asked:
Q: Which of the three recommended services is the most preferred?
A: Actually, it depends on what you’re looking for. So if you ask us which service is more suitable for you, we will answer:
Whether you’re looking for a place to park your personal home page, or a professional internet presence for your business, HostMonster and BlueHost have been exceeding their customers’ expectations for years. Both companies offer full-featured services that can fulfill all of your requirements.
HostMonster and BlueHost are owned by the same parent company. They are really easy to use and reliable to power their online presence. Both offer “Free Site Builder” that helps you build your web pages without difficulty, even if you are not skilled in using any website creating program. Their web builder is a WYSIWYG program (What-You-See-Is-What-You-Get). WYSIWYG means that the finished page will display exactly the way it was designed. In a word, both services are great and easy enough to work with.
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Delete the comma after page in the second paragraph.
Full-featured in the last sentence of the second paragraph has awkward wording.
Second sentence in the third paragraph is awkward starting with “reliable to power their online presence.” Try to fix because the sentence doesn’t really make sense.
Otherwise good :-)
you did great
I would leave out,
to power their online presence, because the word reliable says what you need convey.
also
build your web pages easily even if have no experience creating programs (webpages)…. sounds more like what you want for english.
leave out..in a word.
The grammer is very good, and it will work as is.
I am assuming you are marketing this for english speaking people and the changes simplify your ad and make it flow a bit better because it is simplified.
Eek!
The question asks which of the THREE recommended services is the most preferred. Is the parent company who offers HostMonster and BlueHost your preferred answer then?
Hmm. Don’t you want to name that company?
You should also know if you’re recommending a host service for personal or business use already, if you’re answering a question, I’d think. :-/
Apart from that I would say the reply to the question might be better phrased like this:
A: The preferred service varies with customer requirements, but in your case we’d definitely say that since HostMonster and BlueHost are owned by the same parent company, both subsidiaries offer full-featured services that can fulfill all of your requirements.
Whether you’re looking for a place to park your personal home page, or a professional internet presence for your business, HostMonster and BlueHost have both been exceeding their customers’ expectations for years. Both are really easy to use, too, and bring reliable power to their online presence.
Either offers a free “Site Builder” that helps you build your web pages without difficulty, even if you are not skilled in using any website creating program. Their web builder is a WYSIWYG program (What-You-See-Is-What-You-Get), and this technology means that the finished page will always display exactly the way it was designed.
In conclusion, then, you’re afforded a choice. Both services are very good, easy to work with and should reliably fulfill your needs.